The Good, the Bad, and the Mysterious

Since, I posted here in the RP Profiles section, I will state some examples:

An example of a good profile:

redkage wrote:

Name: Reeve Cage
Age: 17
Appearance: Reeve is an average sized person at 5'11" and 160 lbs. He has messy brown hair and blue eyes. His school uniform consists of a regular black jacket and slacks, but when he's doing work for the resistance he wears a red and khaki jacket and dark slacks with a visor to hide his identity, as well as a red scarf and a cowboy hat.
Bio: When Reeve was young, he witnessed his father, who had been a drunk, be taken away by the Society and never heard from him again. Now, he's a normal student at school, but in secret he's part of the Resistance to get revenge on the Society and find his missing father.
Deck Type: Gunman Deck, with cards based on the cowboys of the old Wild West.

An example of a bad profile:

Rainbow Diamond wrote:

Shinomori Kaotowashi
Age: 19
Appearance: Spiked Silver Hair, Usualy wears a Black Pair of Pants with a Striped Shirt. He Appears to be about 6' 4"
Bio:Shinomori Kaotowashi is a member of the Resistance. He Joined the Resistance at the age of 17 after witnessing his Parents Murder by the Society . Shinomori is a Cold person, he has no friends and blames himself for the death of his parents. He Currently seeks Revenge on the Society for what they did to his parents. He has a Rivalry with Reeve. Shinomori is an expert Technological Engineer, and is highly intelligent despite what he shows. He is fascinated by Ancient Life and Scripts of Foreign Text.
Deck: Shinomori mainly uses Machines and Warriors. He likes to experiment and evaluate other players.

Also, I'll post an example of a mysterious profile:

Ryu Kuze wrote:

Name: ??? (Currently Unknown)
Age: 26
Appearance: Despite his age, he looks like a young male with spiked dark blue hair wearing a black-hooded overcoat with black pants and black shoes. Not much else is known about him since he wears the black hood at this time.
Character Bio: Once aligned to the Resistance, at age 20, he was betrayed by his closest friends. Due to his low self-esteem, he thought to himself to never return to the Resistance or never join the Society, since neither group held his ideals. Unfortunately, an accident occurred, shattering his dream and luring him forever in eternal darkness. Six years have passed, since he was taken in, but the darkness granted him his body when he was 20 years old. Now, he watches in the Shadows, looking through mirrors projecting the Resistance and Society members plotting a course for revenge.
Deck Type: Mirror Reflection Deck

Have fun, and I'll be observing these profiles to see if it's good or bad. If it is deemed bad, I will request you to change your profile.