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PostSubject: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:06 am

Name: Alexander Nash
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Bio: Just a regular hard working scientist for the Arclight, he works time and hours for most of the basic projects, he is the average salary man in some sense. However he is one of the scientist in the group that help push forwards new technologies and ideas. As part of the companies scientists he was allowed to design some cards for them and even he created some of his own original cards. This regular joe just wants to get on with his life and make his family happy though before in the past he was a dueling master.

The deck I will finish up later very soon
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:11 am

Last time, you tried the "scientist" routine, you screwed up royally. Either come up with something new, or learn how to RP as a scientist. (You better be asking a lot of people, because if I hear a complaint, I'm going to be angry.)
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:54 am

Yea i plan on taking a side role this time as a scientist, im going to be a bit more chill and out of the picture so i shouldnt screw up royally this time
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:12 am

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Yea i plan on taking a side role this time as a scientist, im going to be a bit more chill and out of the picture so i shouldnt screw up royally this time

Uh...I don't believe you. Please provide an example, please. (RP example)
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:11 am

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bombboy wrote:
Yea i plan on taking a side role this time as a scientist, im going to be a bit more chill and out of the picture so i shouldnt screw up royally this time

Uh...I don't believe you. Please provide an example, please. (RP example)

While I haven't seen you RP this before, I would be relieved to see an RP assuming said role, as well.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:45 am

No one trusts me anymore sniff sniff but anyways said example since im going to be focusing more on a laid back scientist just trying to get his paycheck

The lab was bustling as ever people working at their stations and computers quickly trying to get out the newest of technology out for the company to make profit out of. Nash was assigned to the design group for today.

"So anyone got any new bright ideas for a product to produce, the company needs some new products to put on the line" said Scientist group leader

"Hmmm another boring day at work haaaa" thought Nash, "Hope someone pitches something good so we can start building it"

"Well if we could increase the realism of the game im sure it could result in some good feedback" said scientist lacky 1

"No we tried that before ended horribly" replied Scientist group leader

"Oh yeah they never did find that guys limbs after the test" thought Nash

The group then went into silence

"Hmm what new fancy toy to improve yugioh" thought Nash, then he got an idea and slowly started to speak

"What if we build a basic ranking system for the yugioh world people could register for a fee but then be put into a world ranking system. This system could be used to set up duels between people near each other at the same level of playing thereby increasing the amount of play people have and the challenge they have against other people" said Nash

"Hmm not a bad idea Nash" said the Group Leader, "Alright ill send this idea to the President while you guys start coming up with the design of this program and how to build it"

"Great finally we get to do something" thought Nash

"Lets get to work people" said the Group leader

Quickly everyone scurried back to their work stations and quickly got writing ideas on how to implement this new ranking system

"Haaaa never an easy day at work" Thought Nash as he began to design the project
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:16 am

I don't like it. It doesn't seem to fit a scientist archetype at all. Also, keep in mind that Arclight and Kaiba Corporation do not produce cards. They produce Duel Monsters technologies, while Industrial Illusions is responsible for the production of cards. To be honest, you seem to take the concept of being a scientist too frivolously. Maybe you could try RPing a more weighted subject, since you won't be suggesting everyday stuff like "ranking systems" in the RP, I can guarantee you that. What the "subject" is exactly, I don't know. At least you don't forget your character's personality, but you'll have to forgive me if I reject an example that seems lighthearted to me. You do have a good direction at the beginning, but it seems too... melodramatic, if anything. If you care to, I'll be more than willing to evaluate you again.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:37 am

Hmm do you think its possible that i go along with this small idea, but the company sees my potential as an inventor since ive been suggesting many good ideas lately though on a small scale that they eventually want to put me to work on more advance projects, plus i was thinking that the ranking system would be used by the company in a evil way, that not only that players can track other players the company can track anyone that has registered to this ranking system and certain things they do etc.?
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:45 am

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Hmm do you think its possible that i go along with this small idea, but the company sees my potential as an inventor since ive been suggesting many good ideas lately though on a small scale that they eventually want to put me to work on more advance projects, plus i was thinking that the ranking system would be used by the company in a evil way, that not only that players can track other players the company can track anyone that has registered to this ranking system and certain things they do etc.?

That wouldn't be a bad start. Do an RP pertaining to that, maybe arguing with your boss or something. Choice is yours.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:02 am

Natalya wrote:
bombboy wrote:
Hmm do you think its possible that i go along with this small idea, but the company sees my potential as an inventor since ive been suggesting many good ideas lately though on a small scale that they eventually want to put me to work on more advance projects, plus i was thinking that the ranking system would be used by the company in a evil way, that not only that players can track other players the company can track anyone that has registered to this ranking system and certain things they do etc.?

That wouldn't be a bad start. Do an RP pertaining to that, maybe arguing with your boss or something. Choice is yours.

Alright sounds good so tell me when you start up your RP
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:31 am

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Natalya wrote:
bombboy wrote:
Hmm do you think its possible that i go along with this small idea, but the company sees my potential as an inventor since ive been suggesting many good ideas lately though on a small scale that they eventually want to put me to work on more advance projects, plus i was thinking that the ranking system would be used by the company in a evil way, that not only that players can track other players the company can track anyone that has registered to this ranking system and certain things they do etc.?

That wouldn't be a bad start. Do an RP pertaining to that, maybe arguing with your boss or something. Choice is yours.

Alright sounds good so tell me when you start up your RP

... I still need your tryout. >_>
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:14 pm

...try out?
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:34 pm

Oh so im still not in yet.....
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sat Jun 05, 2010 9:55 pm

Alice in chains wrote:
...try out?

bombboy wrote:
Oh so im still not in yet.....

It means that he needs to post -another- example....if I guess correctly.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:21 am

Ryu Kuze wrote:
Alice in chains wrote:
...try out?

bombboy wrote:
Oh so im still not in yet.....

It means that he needs to post -another- example....if I guess correctly.

*Sips tea.* Indeed, good chap.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:58 am

I think he forgot to make another example....
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 5:25 am

I never really established him as a scientist, to be honest.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 6:27 am

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I never really established him as a scientist, to be honest.

He was a scientist in S. Revolt until we figured out that he made everything just stupidly broken. And then, we watched him like a hawk and more people complained on how he wasn't a scientist.

Yes, he needs to pick a different occupation, because he obviously doesn't know how to be a "scientist".
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:43 am

Its a sad day when a Science char gets rejected Razz
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:23 am

Other wrote:
Its a sad day when a Science char gets rejected Razz

He's been warned several times about him being a scientist in S. Revolt.
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PostSubject: Re: RP:YDS Arclight Scientist and Card Maker, Alexander Nash   Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:27 pm

Oh...He made my guy stuff...*tear*
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